اشعار انگلیسی سروده اعضا تالار

mohx

عضو جدید
با سلام
این تاپیک برای کسانی است که انگلیسی را به شیوه ی متفاوت دوست دارند یعنی شعر و البته سروده ی خودشان
 

mohx

عضو جدید
Death

Death

over the ocean of life
there is a keen , a keen knife
the bird the first that flies
the first voluntary dies
the day life is in bloom
going siliently to doom
all are running in a haste
to test very bitter taste
it can never be omit
at last you should do it meet
it is like a reverse match
you are the lost you if catch
the poor the rich the good man
the bad the white black tan
difference never you are where
death does the kiss over there
it is certain all of guys
one day is born one day dies


:gol:Khoshdel shahrivar 87:gol:
اگر نفهمیدید فکر نکنید مشکل از زبان انگلیسی شماست​
 

mohx

عضو جدید
فکر کنم رباعی ولی انگلیسیش

فکر کنم رباعی ولی انگلیسیش

every morn thar i look to mountains for the sun
recall me all of my good friends who are gone
i believe that a day late or soon
should sleep like them all in my one
:gol:Khoshdel 87​
 

jaky

عضو جدید
Trying hard to speak and
Fighting with my weak hand
Driven to distraction
So part of the plan
When something is broken
And you try to fix it
Trying to repair it
Any way you can
I'm diving off the deep end
You become my best friend
I wanna love you
But I don't know if I can
I know something is broken
And I'm trying to fix it
Trying to repair it
Any way I can
You and me are floating
on a tidal wave
You and me are drifting
into outer space
 
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jaky

عضو جدید
Oh brother I can't, I can't get through
I've been trying hard to reach you,
cause I don't know what to do
Oh brother I can't believe it's true
I'm so scared about the future and I wanna talk to you
Oh I wanna talk to you
You can take a picture of something you see
In the future where will I be?
You can climb a ladder up to the sun
Or write a song nobody has sung
Or do something that's never been done
 

jaky

عضو جدید
What if there was no life
Nothing wrong, nothing right
What if there was no time
And no reason, or rhyme
What if I got it wrong
And no poem or song

Every step that you take
Could be your biggest mistake
It could bend or it could break
That's the risk that you take
How can you know when you don't even try
You know that darkness
always turns into light
 
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Sir

عضو جدید
این شعر رو دو سال پیش گفتم (البته اگه بشه اسمشو شعر گداشت)

Vultures and thieves of wisodom are now surrounding me
and pushing me to get out of the way
I swore to find myself and not to waste
but where I'm going is nobody's guess
the nearer it comes , the harder it seems

Today is in my hand and tommorow is in my mind
and the tension wants me to make a real fantasy !!!
one thing that is left to say is:
"Be sure, I never walk out of you!"
That's nice Milad, you're about to reach the 10
 

jonny depp

عضو جدید
کاربر ممتاز
hello
how are you
:w15::w15:این شعر رو من خیلی فکر کردم تا تونستم بگم:w15:
 

Modernist

عضو جدید
what's beautiful of dying form your love
what's beautiful of sitting for hours that u come
what's beautiful of waiting for you
what's beautiful of crying for your love
what's beautiful of seeing ocean of your eyes
what's beautiful of torturing of seeing you with others
what's beautiful of seeing when you are happy
what's beautiful of quareling with you
what's beautiful of seeing your hands in other hand
what's beautiful of smothering for your love
what's beautiful of saying me you hate me
what's beautiful of saying me go away
what's beautiful of saying me you are in love with another

 

sam-smith

عضو جدید
Hi,
it's my first poem and I know that it's terrible, so plz don't make fun of me
all the comments are welcomed

and here's my so-called poem

Ultimate love

Don't cry to me baby, dear
I can't see your world to be full of tear,
What made your world to be so cloudy here?
The earth isn't as small as it is seemed here,
But you can't run away and be where that you want to be there,
You've got to try to bring heaven right here
But it can't come true, unless you find your rescuer
Who's the one for you dear?
Don't be hurry for finding him/her?
Be patient so you can find your ultimate love for ever
 

Modernist

عضو جدید
Hi,
it's my first poem and I know that it's terrible, so plz don't make fun of me
all the comments are welcomed

and here's my so-called poem

Ultimate love


Don't cry to me baby, dear


I can't see your world to be full of tear,


What made your world to be so cloudy here?


The earth isn't as small as it is seemed here,


But you can't run away and be where that you want to be there,


You've got to try to bring heaven right here


But it can't come true, unless you find your rescuer


Who's the one for you dear?


Don't be hurry for finding him/her?


Be patient so you can find your ultimate love for ever

tnx for your poem.It is nice
It's not terrible as you said.

I think its better u said don't cry to me dear and omit the baby​
 

bmd

کاربر حرفه ای
کاربر ممتاز
there is no one , die for it
my heart is tired to beat
people can't believe on me
so what can i say? oh sh i t
:cry::cry::cry:
 

Lord HellisH

مدیر بازنشسته
کاربر ممتاز
there is no one to die for
my heart is too tired to beat
people don't believe in me
so what can I say? oh sh i t

:cry::cry::cry:



Dude, you're hell of a poet


I've corrected your mistakes ;)
 

bmd

کاربر حرفه ای
کاربر ممتاز

If by rhythm you mean rhyme، I have to notice that there were no perfect rhymes too

it & me ... beat & s--t :surprised:

I wait eagerly

nonnon no no no
it & beat and also by sh it

this is "
quatrain poet form" i think
********A ********A
********B ********A

---------------------
OK NOTICE TO THIS ONE
the world is full of foolish
i've an unfaith friend..he's helish
actually we were three. me, lord and spow
wolf ate him.. lord went to rabbit &fet***0

 

bmd

کاربر حرفه ای
کاربر ممتاز
can't see the future
sounds surround me again
need a great hope to jump here
Otherwise I'll fall in death and fear:cry:
 
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